poetic_girl

Waiting For Something BIG...(a poem I wrote)

Date: 14 Oct 2007, 6:58 pm / Mood: anxious

just another poem I wrote...i know this one is a bit lame...well, REALLY lame...but oh well, i'll put it up anyways...even though u might not get it, might ask a lot of questions, or just might not like it at all...

here I go again... :)






Waiting For Something BIG

by:ME!




You're always waiting...waiting very still

Sitting or standing on that same old hill...



Each morning that you would see the sun rising

You'd look very closely and your eyes always widen...



But when it is nighttime and everyone's asleep

You'd get up. You'd get right at your feet...



When everybody's eating, you'd sit and do your studies

What are you doing? I can hear that rumbling tummy...



Even when I talk to you, you look right at the ground

I look into your eyes, it's as if there's something you have found...



You always act so quiet as if nobody's talking

You got right out of your chair and just started walking...



You walk right out of sight, and your eyes open wide

Now something's going on with you, something has touched you inside...



I may not seem to know what is going on

What was up with u? Or was it something with me that's wrong?...



Now your face is full of light and much brighter than ever

When I look at you, it's like you're writing to me a letter...



I can see that you are saying something I need to know

Is it really that important? Or is it you, inside, that has grown...



Come with me outside, give me your hand

You need to tell me now, I cannot understand...



All that I see is that you've found something now

You've found something that you've been waiting for these past hours...



I think it was worth it, all the time you were still

All that time you stood on that same old hill...



Is that why each morning that the sun would rise

You'd look very closely and your eyes opened wide?...



Hush now...You need to get some rest

I think these past few days I was acting like a pest...



Now that I know that you are alright

One more thing I'm sure of is you'll get some sleep tonight...



Now I know why these past few days you hid

I knew you were waiting for something...Waiting for something big...



R112 (20 Oct 2007, 1:12 am):
what is this about? is it about a pet? if im wrong hope it doesn't offend you. and how is this a lame poem, this is propa cool dude.
Insan_muslim (15 Oct 2007, 5:46 pm):
Salam,
Mashallah...
thanks...
afghan_empire (14 Oct 2007, 6:56 pm):
beautiful poem :) thanks for sharing, keep up the good work.